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Haiku My Heart: Buckets of Rain


indistinct vista…
buckets of rain pouring down
 inundating streets

some say it’s angels
crying for humans below
dare we plead it cease?

sharing with Rebecca's

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GlorV1 said…
Hi Norma. Lucky you to have buckets of rain. Love your Haiku and more than likely it could be angels crying for all of us who need prayer from all of the heartaches that are going on. Very nice.
August 22, 2014 at 4:38 PM
Lea said…
I would welcome those tears... perhaps you can have a reprieve while they come and look over our parched lands over here... and... I don't know if you got my response to your comment, but I say yes!
August 22, 2014 at 4:45 PM
foxysue said…
Hi Nonnie, this is a lovely haiku, I will think about it when our long winter returns with many rainy days and grey skies...

Thank you for visiting me, knowing others who have gone through similar situations is comforting... My two sons live a distance, my daughter needs support herself. I keep praying for strength...x
August 23, 2014 at 1:29 AM
Mark said…
Indistinct vistas are so mysterious. They give rise to many stories and poems!
August 23, 2014 at 5:06 AM
Graham Edwards said…
There must be a lot of unhappy angels in the world at the moment Norma.
August 23, 2014 at 5:55 AM
Anonymous said…
Only when we are beyond tears, which I hope we never are. Well done, Nonni.
August 23, 2014 at 10:15 AM
Ida said…
Nice Haiku, Sounds like you've had some rain. We had a good "Thunderstorm" last night with rain & hail.
August 23, 2014 at 11:26 AM
Nonnie said…
yep, we have! our river has been low much of the summer, but is now high.
August 23, 2014 at 4:56 PM
Nonnie said…
thank you, annieelf!
August 23, 2014 at 4:56 PM
Anonymous said…
We too had a deluge last night...wish we could move this rain around to where it's needed!
August 24, 2014 at 8:51 AM
Gillena Cox said…
I soo luv your impressions of the rain, lovely haiku, have a nice Sunday;Sunday happy you dropped in at my blog

Much love...
August 24, 2014 at 10:44 AM
Nonnie said…
as do I, Stephanie! poor California.
August 24, 2014 at 3:27 PM
Nonnie said…
thanks, Gillena!
August 24, 2014 at 3:27 PM
Cynthia of Cynful Creations said…
We need the rain so much but when it's a deluge, it can so often be damaging. Ah Mother Nature, she who cannot be predicted but without whom, we would be lost! Although I can see how those angels would have a lot of cry for right now. :(
August 25, 2014 at 12:00 PM
tami said…
oh the rain - either too much or too little - we can only accept and watch - seeking the beauty in each.
August 25, 2014 at 6:37 PM
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